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Introduction

Fiction

Fallout
by Pamela Schoenewaldt

Ten Thousand Cigarettes
by Rachel E. Pollock

On Broadway
by Marianne Worthington

Poetry

Night Train, 1944
by Jeff Daniel Marion

Red Lines

For Richard Marius, My Teacher in Memory
by Edward Francisco

Knoxville: Summer, 2003
by Judy Loest

 

Red Lines

Leaving Knoxville in late August, I pass them

on the road beside the close-cut field,

a half-dozen whispery thin local boys

piled into the bed of a pick-up truck,

the work of summer jobs finished—

tobacco leaves strung up in barn lofts to dry,

hay bales twined and rolled under tarp.

I would like that feeling again of muscles

drawn tight as fencing wire, pounding

like an electric surge under the skin.

I suppose they’re headed home for dinner,

to sit across from their silent fathers

and glimpse the end of farming season—

6:00 A.M. shifts at Marlock, days spent

riveting brass hinges onto cabinet frames,

gluing particle board to the backs of mirrors.

For months after my first year of college

I spent mornings suckering tobacco plants

and evenings looking for an apartment

in town, an alternative to those blistering days.

I hated the endless measurement of it,

pain equal to production, every hour given

its weight and count and dollar figure.

When these boys get up from empty plates

they know where to look for one another,

heading down Highway 33, or 25E,

toward Jim’s Place, or Opal’s,

pool tables, beer on draft, various troubles.

They get to be drinking men early,

load into the chamber of the fastest car

revving the engine until it red lines

and the tires slick down from squalling.

They are more fortunate than some:

design of history working as it does,

the young men gain a sense of destiny.

Some will die in hideous crashes—

or worse, kill others and live.

But most survive these times and come

away with their inheritance,

a story of when the wheels left pavement

and God alone knows how I held on.

November 24, 2004 • Vol. 14, No. 48
© 2004 Metro Pulse